Grounded in our real material and written for a cold, sceptical, hurting married man who doesn't know Will yet. Each direction enters through a different emotional door. Click any tile to open it full-size.
Same eight directions, reworked: the $7-for-7-days entry (no more "free"), honest anonymised copy, and the critics' legibility/copy fixes applied. Scores are the re-critique marks.
The first deep round, left exactly as built (still says "free", pre-fixes). Kept here so you can compare.
Still your call before anything goes live (the critics can't fix these): verify the real stats, secure testimonial consent, settle "father of 7 vs 8", verify the press/Harvard claims, and wire the real $7-trial checkout + WhatsApp handoff. Batch 2 made the copy safe (anonymised, no invented specifics) but the true numbers still need confirming.